Today I did another task this task was to do with haiku poems. In the first sentience I had to have fives syllables in the second one I had to have seven syllables and in the last one i had to do another five. I looked at some e.g. on google the had some very cool ones i don't think o did it right but i still gavevit a go. I had already done a haiku poem before in writing or reading I forgot
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Kia ora Akeilah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona and I'm from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed reading your awesome haiku poem about summer - ka pai! It can be tricky getting the correct number of syllables in each line but good on you for persisting and having a go. I really like your middle line about ice blocks giving you a brain freeze. This happens to me a lot in summer!
Do you have sunflowers in your garden at home? They do grow really tall.
Keep up the awesome work.
Fiona (SLJ).
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