Today I did another Summer learning journey task I had to search up a image and write a song about the image. I chose a image of a medal because I had a cool idea to write about achieving and when you achieve you win awards so my song is obviously my song is about achieving here is my work.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, December 17, 2020
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Kia Ora Akeilah, Kiana again from the Summer Learning program.
ReplyDeleteTino pai! This is awesome! You have chosen such an iconic image that I think a lot of people will recognise, you have also created a positive chorus about achievement. My favorite part of the chorus is when you said “You just have to believe in yourself” because often i forget what i am capable of if i just believe in myself, so this was a good reminder for me. How was your experience with this activity, did you find it to be challenging or the opposite?
Keep up the good work. I look forward to hearing a response from you in the comment section below.
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino
Thank you Kiana I worked really hard on it and have been doing the task everyday
DeleteAkeilah