Today I did another task o had to write and haiku poem and add a image to describe my story. I did it on a google side show. It was really fun and it was hard to think about what I was going to write about. Here is my work.
Saturday, December 19, 2020
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Kia ora Akeilah
ReplyDeleteBen here again
Thanks for all of these haiku! They are very poetic and paint strong images of some of your experiences. Especially the last one, alongside that emotive emoji that you chose. I think we can all relate to feeling nervous like that…
If you are interested, you could revisit your haiku and check that they fit the 5-7-5 haiku structure. Then again, poetry is deeply personal and if you are happy with the way they are then kei te pai.
Keep up the great work Akeilah
Benjamin Martelli